My fingers are tired...
So I'll just say it was awesome.
My fingers are tired...
So I'll just say it was awesome.
thanks man
True.
Really nice that you used this great beat for your song. It fits perfect with the vocals.
It's cool that you make rap that actually matters! All the other rap songs you hear is like: "Yo, I shot sum people today and sold 5 pounds of coke". That's just some shit that they spit out cuz they can't figure out something else.
Hope you continue rapping man!
/DM
Bassline
The melody doesn't fit with the D'n'B, you gotta fix that.
It sounds kinda lame... But with a better bassline and a more variated drumloop this could turn out good :)
/DM
Orite thanks =D
This was great!
A real nice idea, there.
I thought of remixing the valve theme in when the game starts.
Now about the song; it was quite thrilling. When the tank-part started the bass got my blood pumping a bit faster. Know it sounds kinda creepy, but that's how it is :p
It was smart of you to make the end like that!
Great song! 10/10 5/5
/DaMux
Nice tune.
I see that most of the reviews you've recieved are useless.
So here is a helpful one;
This song was great but if you want more people to listen to it, you could change the genre of it.
Like hip-hop, RnB (hopefully not trance/techno) but you get my point, right?
Anyways...
This song could be transformed into anything, that's what's so good with the piano; it can be used in any genre.
I hope you keep up the good work!
/DaMux
Ok?
Nice little tune, dude. Kinda creepy after a little while :p
Good luck with the cancer-thing...
This must be the greatest rap song ever created.
It has an awesome lyrics that you can learn a lot from.
The violin tapping and the orchestra makes the song a little sader.
The old-skool beat and the bass sound perfect togeather.
I hope you will become famous some time!
Wish ya the best of luck, dawg!
{MuX}
Something we all adore,
Something we're dying for,
Nothing but pain stuck in this game,
Searching for fortune and fame.
Shit, dude...
This song was fucken great, man!
Nice lyrics and melody.
I see that a lot of people think you sound like Eminem, ( I don't see how that would be good ;p ) this is better! Seriously.
Keep the spirit up!
{MuX}
That was sick!
In a god damn good way!
The bass kinda feels like you're passing a speaker;
It's goes from the left to the right, that's one of the things that makes this song so fucken awesome :D
Why?
Why did you have to create a musical masterpiece into a sharp, crappy techno song?
It's called fun kiddo. At 14 years of age I thought you may have grasped that concept by now.
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